Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Advertising can tell you a lot about a country. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Every country has it’s own values and traditions. It’s an era of T.V, internet and mobiles; e-marketing is one of the best source of selling goods and a vital part in increasing knowledge about a different civilisation. In this essay, I will explain how these plugs are telling about others kingdom.
Firstly, if we are a foodie and want to try some scrumptious dishes to eat than what is the source of knowing about restaurants and cafe in a different country? It’s publicity brochure of different famous dishes or desserts, we will be able to know the price and locations as well by these ads. Moreover, we will know about local eating habits and preferences to eat on a particular events and occasion. To illustrate this, in Pakistan, people are keen to eat sugary items like sweet noodles and pudding than if you will find unique cultural appetizing or mouth-watering sweetened dishes.
Secondly, adverts can tell about different countries education system and you can compare in between them. American and Japanese school systems are known worldwide and Asian countries are most inspired by them. Ads tells us what are the different rules and regulations are acknowledged by them and what kinds of exams are given by students. Furthermore, we understand the cultural dresses and clothing or what are the new trends in specific countries in different official fields like military, office, hospital, teaching, politics etc. that days. In addition, what are the new technologies used in that country like Japanese kitchenware are very popular worldwide. For example, a unique style strainer that strain everything from tea to large vegetables.
In the nutshell, adverts are very useful to know a different country’s education system, dressing and foods and the new trends that are mixing with them.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: IT_IS[13]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
Every country has it’s own values and traditions. It’s an era ...
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Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
...values and traditions. It’s an era of T.V, internet and mobiles; e-marketing is o...
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Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rences to eat on a particular events and occasion. To illustrate this, in Pakista...
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Line 3, column 572, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ue cultural appetizing or mouth-watering sweetened dishes. Secondly, adverts c...
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Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...ondly, adverts can tell about different countries education system and you can compare in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17288135593 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79367282825 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589830508475 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7836038029 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151905546678 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509816117836 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547924226664 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901666315656 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032194060935 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: IT_IS[13]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
Every country has it’s own values and traditions. It’s an era ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
...values and traditions. It’s an era of T.V, internet and mobiles; e-marketing is o...
^
Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rences to eat on a particular events and occasion. To illustrate this, in Pakista...
^^
Line 3, column 572, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ue cultural appetizing or mouth-watering sweetened dishes. Secondly, adverts c...
^^
Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...ondly, adverts can tell about different countries education system and you can compare in...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17288135593 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79367282825 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589830508475 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7836038029 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151905546678 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509816117836 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547924226664 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901666315656 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032194060935 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.