Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In present day society, we are live in modern era and day by day it is getting far away. Now we can imagine such a thing that is impossible in past time. People are having a hard time reaching a consensus on whether people are now more melancholy or more upset with their lives than people were in the past. A plethora of folks holds conflicting ideas. As far as I am concerned , I believe that people are now more delighted than before times. There are several reasons that support my view and i will explore a few of them in the following essay. To begin with, a radical change has occurred in a communication system. Consequently, it leads to people being happy as they can contact to each other easily. First of all, we can consider a mobile device where everyone can look after their family from far cry. For that, they do not make any onerous effort rather they feel better after seeing their family. The second reason is that people in old times had suffered a beggar description to go anywhere. It is obvious that it took prolong time and they could not reach their place in the nick time. But today it does not take much time and people feel more comfortable. The third thing is that people can send their any information through mail. It is commonly accepted that all the things make a internal peace in people mind. The second reason comes to my mind that people are not disapppointed in today. For example, the medical sector plays a significant role in present day. In past day, they had to received any premature die in contrast now they are now live long time. My cousin who is a cancer patient. He has taken advance medicine and thus he has recovered from this dangerous disease. So people are now more happy than ancient moment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...gine such a thing that is impossible in past time. People are having a hard time reaching...
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Line 1, column 378, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...flicting ideas. As far as I am concerned , I believe that people are now more deli...
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Line 1, column 496, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...everal reasons that support my view and i will explore a few of them in the follo...
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Line 1, column 1295, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...monly accepted that all the things make a internal peace in people mind. The seco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, look, second, so, third, thus, for example, in contrast, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47021943574 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35012466425 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573667711599 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2001293076 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.9047619048 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1904761905 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248895456409 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716226624214 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693121994824 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248895456409 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.0946893788 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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