Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People are having a hard time reaching a consensus whether people use more cars twenty years later than today or not. Some people hold conflicting ideas. As far as I am concerned, I firmly believe that there will be more cars present. There are several reasons that support my point of view and I would explore a few of the most important ones here.
The primary reason we have to consider is that modern technology invents more convenient cars every year. It is generally believed that in past times, cars were not so available as well as too expensive. To be more exact, the car company produce a plethora of vehicles every year, and the demand for a car will be expanded more in the future. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Dhaka is our capital city where it is replete with a vast population. Therefore, it requires profuse transports, and as a result, the affluent society buys cars. Thus, the number of vehicles is increasing day by day. It is commonly admissible that modern innovation helps to provide more cars. However, having said this, it is apparent that people use more cars for their daily life.
The second point that comes to mind is that buying a vehicle symbolizes maintaining high society. There is ample evidence suggesting that folk purchase cars show they're haughty. For instance, my uncle is a businessman. He has two cars already, but recently he bought a new brand car. He thinks that it increases his reputation and consequently, it allures other people to do the same things. Moreover, after twenty years, society members will start more competition among them. Finally, given the factors above, we may conclude that innovation and demands lead to people using more cars in the future.
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- TPO 28 Integrated Writing Task 70
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours Use specific reasons and examples to support 56
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...suggesting that folk purchase cars show theyre haughty. For instance, my uncle is a bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80602006689 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56702852783 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622073578595 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2827784509 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.85 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.95 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213890772423 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536889014245 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521963676026 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152663266193 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038735539303 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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