Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Grades (marks) encourage students to learn. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Both students and parents are so concerned about grades and efforts are to get better grades in each exam. Do the grades motivate students to learn better? I believe that grades are one of the key encouragements to read ferociously and learn the subjects for performing well in exams.
Educationist believes that grade system is essential to develop competitiveness, seriousness and motivation etc. in pupils. In student life, there might not be other better way to assess the knowledge level of each student. In a class, no of students are taught and some do hard-work than others so it become essential to acknowledge those who perform better in exams and get good grades. This not only inculcates the feeling of competition but also makes them aware about the importance of knowledge. Furthermore, following the grading system, even higher education gives priority to students who consistently receive good marks. For example, my friend who scored better marks in all subjects in 12th standards got admission in Oxford University, however, I was not considered.
Another important reason is that the students who do not study enough and consequently score low marks are not promoted to higher class. This becomes the embarrassment for few and triggers the habit of continuous learning and score good marks. For instance, In India, central board conduce the 10th and 12th level exam and results are published by the board and students who score less than defined limit are not permitted to higher class in any schools.
To conclude, some people are against the grades system as it gives stress to students to perform well but what else could be better way to judge the students each year on same standards. In my view, this grading system motivates everyone to learn hard and do better than others in exams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
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Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iveness, seriousness and motivation etc. in pupils. In student life, there might ...
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Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...edge level of each student. In a class, no of students are taught and some do hard...
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Line 2, column 303, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...and some do hard-work than others so it become essential to acknowledge those who perf...
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Line 4, column 42, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'grades'' or 'grade's'?
Suggestion: grades'; grade's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02990033223 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70657908769 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551495016611 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7114474966 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.142857143 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184304204126 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738814620777 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607120016639 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129398248646 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440673496918 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.