Doctors in many countries concern that people are not getting enough physical exercise. What cause this? How this can be solved?
Physicians in several nations worry about people are not doing the right amount of physical activity they should do. Lack of interest and place are considered to be two main facts behind this issue, however, the solution is simple and easy such as making people understand the importance of it and building new exercise zones.
To begin with, every type of outdoor and indoor activity needs lots of energy, as a result, individuals are more likely to skip this. For example, one research found 75% of people find it extremely hard to do sports, yoga, gym and so on. Thus, they tend to avoid it. Moreover, working out place are few in numbers, especially in urban areas where air quality is poor. For instance, Dhaka place not only number one air polluted city, but also an overpopulated metropolitan with rarely have open space which is enough to demotivate anyone doing warm up.
Overcoming upper mentioned trouble is absolutely straightforward. Some campaign should start to make commoner realize the significance of this activity to their fitness. To give a clear example, understanding the effect of physical exercise will not only convince citizen to be health conscious resulting lowering obese rate. Another possible solution is developing certain numbers of activity park. In addition, keep the air as clean as possible by planting trees. To illustrate, in Bangladesh the Gulshan area has a number of park and sports field, whereas Mirpur has a few as a result, resident of Gulshan are more active than Mirpur.
In conclusion, the medical practitioner raises their concern about the absence of adequate physical activity of individuals. Insufficient working out zone and public attention are reasons behind this. To solve this issue there should be more exercise ground, and convincing people to be active.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 537, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
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Line 2, column 552, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ugh to demotivate anyone doing warm up. Overcoming upper mentioned trouble is ab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15540540541 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7185682972 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638513513514 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0445267805 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171254192484 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504436346378 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596197538991 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117791656179 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750056371484 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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