Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health.
Do you agree with this?
Doctors are believed to be second god on earth and most knowledgeable person about health and its related concern. It is argued by a significant number of individuals that do surgeons should be accountable for providing detail information to their patients how to get rid off from illness. In my opinion, I believe that providing knowledge to patients can cure them from infections.
Doctors should be responsible for providing detail information to their patients on health conditions because patient may suffer or die if they are not educated about their health conditions. While diagnosing their patients’ doctors are aware of the seriousness of issues with the patient’s health, therefore, to treat them with right medication, it is the responsibility of doctor to provide right knowledge to their patients and ways to improve. For that reason, doctors are considered the best consultant about any health issues.
Doctors are the most knowledgeable identity in health issues and as a responsible citizen of society it becomes their duty to educate their patients about health risks. Often doctors conduct awareness campaign to educate the community about different health risks like HIV or Swine flu infection to prevent their patients from getting infected. For instance, Indian Medical association conducts awareness camps in government hospitals every month to keep their patients updated with emerging diseases.
In conclusion, making their patients aware of their health conditions is important step in curing them from diseases and preventing from any further risk of infections. Hence doctors should keep educating the society about any health risk they find and this will also improve the fitness level of people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 169, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49626865672 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88245966768 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55223880597 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2047972648 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.909090909 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.549454218617 0.244688304435 225% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222667351635 0.084324248473 264% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112318126735 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.345631481489 0.151304729494 228% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923476306781 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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