Does video communication with doctor help patients to cure any disease? Pros & Cons?
In recent year there has been colossal upsurge in the ongoing debate escalating the aid of the doctors to the patients using the video calling can cure any diseases, be it an impoverished or affluent nation. In this essay, I will elaborate both the merits and demerits to aged patient by using video communication.
At the outset, there are myriad benefits, first, the aged people affected with problems and travelling to them becomes a profound situation, in that case the video communication is the best source to tackle. For instance, in Philippines slum areas due to temblor, a multitude people affected with serious health problems, thanks to the government of health organization which persevere to limit the mortality rates that achieved from video conferencing. Apparently, the technology made it possible to overcome up with plummeting the death rates and save the time.
However, there are some pitfalls that can overwhelmed on potential benefits of increasing the life expectancy. The primary concerns stem from the fact that video communication is not always a perfect solution specially to the aged people who may not able to clear with proper manifestation of the problem. For example, in Arab countries due to language problems aged people may not able to communicate their views on the problems for which the patient are battled, verbal communication is not always a good solution to acquire with suitable treatment. As a result, leads to negative impact on the health.
To recapitulate from the arguments aforementioned, one can conclude that despite of having the positive impacts on health condition, but the upsides shall look closely into this matter in limiting the video communication and government shall work together with world health organization in looking after opening hospitals were required.
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apparently, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3275862069 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95038037411 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589655172414 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.3811403213 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.5 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206176194814 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736684382527 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497486783614 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119064392748 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409301337904 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.