Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.
Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets the businesses of the small and local businessmen are affected as they are not capable enough to compete. Firstly, because of the technological advancement today many of them are not able to capture the interests of the customers like the bigger competitors that they have.
Secondly, consumers prefer to shop in a bigger and better environment where they can find many kinds of products of the same nature and so many choices are available in these supermarts.
Thirdly, people will get many kinds of attractive and beneficial deals on their purchase which are not possible to be given by the local vendors and traders as they will lose their revenue from the product which they sell.
Fourth and the most important reasons are the varieties and the lucrative offers and even the bigger customer support that a purchaser gets when he shops in these big giant malls and supermarkets like Best buy, Wal-Mart and Reliance just to name a few and the beautiful scenario around them and the ambience captures the mind of the customers magnificently.
As this kind of advancement is not possible for the localities and minute businesses are not that much open to the lavishness of this kind as it will harm their pockets and they are not having enough resources to back the crowds at their doors.
Mainly this will hamper their business and can cause a total annihilation of the medium and normal businesses. Earlier these shops were able to make as much profit as they want but now the situation is completely turned against them. Technical advancements, infrastructures, scenarios and presentation has kind of change the game for these bigger corporates as they have made the competition tough for the local businesses to survive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f the customers magnificently. As this kind of advancement is not possible for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98996655518 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79059264309 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548494983278 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.7949377343 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.777777778 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2222222222 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187727543386 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906550286945 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992255948237 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100516696956 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693540373008 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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