You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news.
Write to your friend. In the letter:
• Describe the house.
• Describe the neighbourhood.
• Invite your friend to come and see the house.
Dear ABC,
I hope you are in good health and spirits. I am happy to share this wonderful news that I have bought a big house in the countryside area in Ludhiana. It is a nice and beautiful place and I would like to invite you to my new place for a small welcoming party. I will further elaborate about my new destination.
I am quiet proud of the place it has a fully furnished garden outside which makes the scenic view so refreshing and appealing to the eyes. Inside the house, there are three rooms which are well furnished and fully spacious. The room with a big master bedroom is for my parents and there is a big study room near to it as my father is a book lover. Then there is the second one right above the stairs which is attached to the balcony from where you can see the exceptional sunrise and stars at night and a round bedroom just like in movies, this is my room. Moreover, there is a big kitchen with all the latest technology cabinets for different food items and utensils. Last but not the least there is a big dining hall in the centre of the house so that the family can have all the meals together as they say the family that stays together eats together.
The other interesting thing is that the neighbourhood area is also there as first I was in a dilemma because my mother was quiet attached to the old neighbours so it was necessary to have someone around the house so that she won't feel lonely and alone. Such a sweet and pleasant family and they were the first to greet us when we arrived and even offered help for shifting our stuff. I think it will be quite fun with festivals coming ahead.
I think now you will also be interested to come to our house and see the things that I praised so much about. Please, do come to the housewarming party with uncle and aunt. I am looking forward to your arrival.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours truly,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Hope to see you soon. Yours truly, XYZ
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, then, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.48453608247 267% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 5.05154639175 317% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 937.175257732 163% => OK
No of words: 358.0 206.0 174% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25698324022 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 3.78020617076 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28365921361 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 127.690721649 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530726256983 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 290.88556701 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4575164254 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6666666667 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182432204119 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612483407488 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558571397413 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113248058354 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060593476046 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.