Each year, the crime rate increases.What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

Crime rate is more higlight in day by day this reason public face more problems in their life.every year crime rate increased by teenagers and young stars.I will explicate courses as well as soliution in my snippet of writing.

Primarily,there are myriad reasons why crime are increased day by day. First and foremost, yongstares are well educated but authority not provide good job oppurtunity this reason they started bad campanies as well as become drug addictive . However, parents are busy in own work they not spend time with their children that's way we not learn good things of lifes. Families are converted into small families students are not spend time with grandparents and not learn custam and traditional. Some time parents are not complet demands of children and children do theft in home and other places . with help of this reasons crime increase day by day.

On the other hand, there are plethora of reasons of crime control .Farstly , small families again join joint families becous if parents are busy in their life and work then children spend free time with grandparents and reacive a best things. Government provide better jobs to students this reason children busy in life and not do illegal activitys . They give some punishments to crimenals ergo children are not do bug crime and public do enjoy safe life.

In cruqs, parents are spend too much time with childrens they give a more knowledge about living style and culture this reason children no feel boring and not started crime.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, then, well, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98023715415 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45081829561 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537549407115 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6527077486 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.545454545 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124681927573 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560369445036 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500253125272 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950118645537 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427375369058 0.056905535591 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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