To begin with,reasons of unlawful acts is unemployment when person do not have job then they choose wrong both to earn money.In crime research,it is clear that60% criminals are jobless.Furthermore,competition also effect on crime rate.we are living in rush to achieve more and more income.so they think about themselves and due to this,jealous they commit crime.
Moreover,moral values taught us what is right or wrong.people who do not have moral values always select wrong way which is quiet dangerous for him or others.last but not least,media plays an vital role to increase crime.people mostly what they try to imitate it.for instance,there are so many misdeed investigate programs running on limeline.after watching these types of serial people try to copy it.
Every problem comes with possible solutions if the criminals are always about the penalty relates to crime than they will noy invalue in thesw crime.in addition to it,governmemt should also implement some strict rules related to crime offencing .Apart form that,job opportunities should be provided to educate persons.
To put in nutshell, I put down saying that crime is a big problem but it can be solved with awareness.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: gandhpre
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 189.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31746031746 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45536269704 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.724867724868 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.879247495 49.4020404114 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 251.25 106.682146367 236% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.25 20.7667163134 228% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.0 7.06120827912 312% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206892114415 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11579491056 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263050786826 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11579491056 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263050786826 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.3 13.0946893788 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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