Education is a continuous process which helps in the
mental development of the person. I totally disagree with the statement. In this essay, i will discuss the views in opposition to the statement with my objectivity.
To start with, ever since the human race started learning, education becomes a part of life, parents teaches their childern the ways of cooking, hunting and gathering food along with the communicating skills. Nowadays, the ways of education has changed but the objective remains same, now in addition to all those things, many new things are taught from science, history to art and craft, in more organised and formal ways. Education is way not only to teach them but also to empower them so that they could live a dignified life independently. Education cannot be confined to learning techniques, it is a process of understanding the things arround you, refining your skill set and increasing the knowledge. Advancement of science and technology leads to new inventions every year, a person wants to remain relevant in todays world needs to learn about them. Otherwise, they will lag behind and become illiterate once the technology they learn to operate becomes outdated and replaced with new one.
Apart from this, person learn something everyday in life through newspapers, television or by talking with colleagues. Schools and colleges are not the only medium of imparting education, they provide the qualification, certified education is called qualification, it is a minimum requirement for the job. Education is a part of evolution, a person keep leaning new thing which leads him to evolve and grow. It is very important for human beings to always open themselves to the medium of learning thus making advancement in the field of science, technology and medicine.
In conclusion, education cannot be compared with training as living life cannot be compared with a job. To leave a legacy and set a positive precedence person should keep his mind fresh by leaning new ideas and theories. Then only a life will remain meaningful and jest of living will be there.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, thus, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83916519347 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568513119534 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3932600034 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0960493102633 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345066003744 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029267189202 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0557957855716 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165013631629 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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