The debate whether or over the environment flooded with myriad of problems is an old one, with the attitude of people shifting throughout the debate over years. Proponents and opponents can make their cases to endorse their views on this contagious issue. In this essay , I will analyze this matter from both point of view and then draw a conclusion at the end. In my opinion, the onus should be on government.
There are numerous of arguments surrounding my viewpoint is that the nowadays environment is confronted with plethora biggest issue like pollution, smoking ,using non recyclable problems ,using over packaged materials, vehicles etc but the most important factor that needs to be considered relates to government deliberation which is totally marginalized. In other words, government can play a intrinsic role by imposing taxes in form of green tax and taxes on the emission of poisonous gases.
To elaborate further, few pertinent examples like various seminars to avoid smoking or run a non polluted vehicles can be taken into consideration.
On the other side of the fence, critics also believed that it should be our own responsibility to look after the environment. knowledge related to environmental problems should be proverbial. However, those who advocate this matter fail to see the picture in this large context.
The other school of thoughts is that green energy like solar panel and energy from water should be promoted to reduce pollution.
In the light of above discussion it is fair and justifiable to say that mitigating the pollution is not only the responsibility of government but also the individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, then, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18867924528 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94875149765 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615094339623 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.164403144 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.583333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164396392658 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579885300407 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329740512362 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081253288445 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184872561965 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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