The debate whether or over the issue of shooting is an old one , with the attitude of people shifting throughout the debate over years . Proponents and opponents make their cases to endorse their views on this contagious issue. In this essay , i will elaborate both the cases and then draw a conclusion. In my opinion , the onus should be on the government.
There are numerous arguments surrounding my viewpoint that in which one is that holding guns at home enhances the plight of shooting because people with their work load, busy schedule and excessive duties remains obsessed and loosing their virility . For example, US government allowed the citizens to have guns for their security purposes but it also raises the risk of unnecessary shooting. I am completely concur with the opinion not to keep guns at home because it could danger the life of a person with no involvement.To elaborate further , few pertinent examples could be taken into consideration that government should provide the licence after ensuing hard terms and conditions.
On the other side of the fence , critics also believed that one can keep guns only for the purpose of security not for to harm others . They also highlighted that if person use it for illegal purpose should be punished with stern rules and must be assaulted. The other school of thoughts is either it should be regulated or banned for the prosperous nation.
In the light of above discussion , it is fair and justifiable to say that there are compelling arguments on the both sides . I must say disadvantage of keeping guns outweighs its advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9925093633 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73056430819 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580524344569 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9285056337 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.083333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0990286752033 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303402776182 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038497418476 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0517262678596 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530390560307 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.