Environmental problems ore loo big for individual countries and individual persons for address. ln other words, we have reached a stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Ever-increasing environment-related problems are the gravest international concerns, nowadays. Some experts believe that initiatives at countries or personal levels are not effective anymore, and the international community needs to intervene in safeguarding the environment. However, I, personally disagree as groundwork for this problem still requires efforts at state and personal levels.
State, to begin with, needs to start new initiatives for prohibitive actions against the deteriorating environment. Aggressive infrastructure development can lead to environmental destruction in developing countries and the state must maintain proper pollution checks in such cases. Additionally, the government should also come up with policies and initiatives that focus on raising awareness about the importance of the well-being of the natural habitat. ‘Swach Bharat Abhiyan’ is one such example, this policy was introduced by the Government of India in the year 2018 to improve cleanliness in the country.
Citizens perhaps have the second most crucial role to play after the country in preserving surroundings. People have the access to their homes where governments can not intervene and it becomes the responsibility of the family to keep hygiene at their homes, and also assure that the garbage accumulated at home is not degrading the local environment. They should have set up for recycling in the house which will help reduce overall waste generation per house. Finally, as a responsible citizens, we ought to maintain cleanliness at public sites such as community parks, in the neighborhood.
It might be true that pressure exerted from international stages such as the U.N. might help speeding up the prohibitive actions at the national level, however, groundwork still needs to be done by local authorities or the public.
Overall, it appears that organizations operating internationally may perhaps be able to build a certain amount of pressure on nations with degraded environmental conditions however most of the patchwork for fixing this problem will still be done by countrymen or the country itself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 489, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'citizen'?
Suggestion: citizen
...on per house. Finally, as a responsible citizens, we ought to maintain cleanliness at pu...
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Line 17, column 66, Rule ID: MIGHT_PERHAPS[1]
Message: Use simply 'may', 'perhaps'.
Suggestion: may; perhaps
...organizations operating internationally may perhaps be able to build a certain amount of pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, may, second, so, still, well, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74213836478 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34149943119 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3658455589 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.461538462 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195666071513 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694607458582 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466317365205 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110116330401 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655502524768 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.