Environmental problems such as pollution and climate variations are increasing nowadays. The goventments have taken some steps at global levels but they got only few solutions, why is so? How can this problem be solved?
It is true that at present environmental issues, be it a pollution or climate alterations, are ascending. Although the government undoubtedly took some actions globally, solutions were rare because all the countries and respective masses are not co-operating to resolve such critical issues. The government can take steps such as environmental and climate law enforcement and by putting political issues aside to mitigate these potential problems.
Despite the steps taken by governments globally, environmental problems such as pollution and climate change are rising rapidly nowadays. This is because the solutions were a few as all the countries were not willing to work on such crucial issues collectively. In other words, there are a few countries, China, for example, offered other countries to install vertical trees globally to combat the problems related to pollution and weather changes. The proportion of the countries willing to implement the idea is low, hence, the issues persist. Further, not all the public co-operated regarding the policies enforced by the governments as they did not abide by them, resulting in lesser progress to resolve life-threatening problems.
Coming to the solution of the very problem, all the countries should join hands together in spite of any political issue to resolve issues that may turn homo sapiens in an endangered species in the coming millenniums. There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problem described above. A simple solution would be to approach the other countries to make them understand the criticality of the devastating issues so that everyone worldwide should be clear of the criticality of the problem and its consequences. After getting on the same page, all the governments should work on these disastrous problems by enforcing the law on masses so that issues could be resolved at the public level as well.
In conclusion, although the governments took some steps worldwide to resolve the environmental pollution and weather changes, the solutions were not enough due to some political clashes among a few countries and rare public support. However, these issues can be tackled worldwide by putting disputes aside, joining hands together and come up with law enforcement related to these potential problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 721, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e resolved at the public level as well. In conclusion, although the governments ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44722222222 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96937948167 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3411670402 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.071428571 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244061841989 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959596931623 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703249215738 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155148850072 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312811902936 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.