A Healthy economy is a sign of a healthy population and vice versa. Every Nation should strive to provide basic healthcare to its citizens, although it might not be possible to provide complex surgeries and treatments free of cost. This essay agrees with the statement and will put forth two main reasons to prove its stance.
Firstly, every person cannot afford health services due to their financial condition. In India, a majority of population lives in villages where they don’t even have basic sanitation and hygiene facilities. The administration should be responsible to provide medical facilities to these locations. For instance, the mobile clinic concept in some of the regions is a classic example of such outreach in the villages. It is difficult for a country to provide advanced medical treatments of rare diseases as a lot of money is spent in research and technology. However, it is important to safeguard the well being of these people as they contribute to the overall growth of the economy.
Secondly, as taxpaying citizens of the country it is a basic need which needs to be addressed by the regime. The monies collected should be enough for at least providing the essential medical requirements for the well being of the populace. To exemplify, a part of the budget needs to be allocated to healthcare and that money can be utilized to fulfill the fundamental remedial services. A planned approach to solving this issue needs to be structured. The regime can also use this budget to open some specialty hospitals catering to remedy the diseases which require latest medical research and technology.
In conclusion, Health of the people is an important aspect of the community and it is advisable that the state take care of its citizens healthcare services not only by increasing the outreach to villages and remote areas but also by allocating funds from the tax collected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, at least, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06984126984 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83279929163 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536507936508 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4606465339 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.466666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235428757131 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706261113335 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422646410063 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121545378331 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516261945409 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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