Automation and digitalization are the latest wonders of the world making life simpler and stress free. However, there are some who believe that such advancements have resulted in loss of jobs and are more complex to use. This essay will discuss how modern technology is a boon to mankind and helps in saving time and money.
To begin with, labor intensive jobs like loading and unloading of goods from ships and planes are time consuming and it requires many people to do it. But, with the help of automation and robotics in this industry, it is now easier and saves time and money both for the employer. For instance, Ships at docks are unloaded in a few hours with the help of the weight lifters and robots unlike earlier times, when it used to take days to unload it. Modern technology and invention are inevitable and the need of the hour to optimize the cost and save time.
However, some might argue that a lot of time is wasted on the latest communication platforms like ‘whatsapp’, ‘facebook’, and the internet as a whole. Such wasted time could be utilized in a productive manner but, thanks to such gadgets we are glued to the couch, and don’t have time to have qualitative interactions and face to face meetings with our loved ones. A lot of labor saving devices are more complex to use and they don’t serve the purpose at times. For instance, the dishwashers are not meant to clean a lot of utensils which are hollow and deep which needs to be cleaned with hands again after washing it in the dishwasher, which increases time and effort for the consumers. Hence a lot of people think it’s better to be old fashioned and do it right the first time.
To conclude, this essay agrees that the modern technology provides a variety of ways to serve humanity and one can only be responsible of misusing the technology on its own accord. In my opinion, the benefits of latest communication tools and sophisticated machines reduce stress and time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a productive manner" with adverb for "productive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ole. Such wasted time could be utilized in a productive manner but, thanks to such gadgets we are glue...
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Line 5, column 719, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ases time and effort for the consumers. Hence a lot of people think it's better ...
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Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...own accord. In my opinion, the benefits of latest communication tools and sophisticated m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, so, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77167630058 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82945024694 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531791907514 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8245709558 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.928571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203142115258 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690599406488 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335790396182 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122994042501 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424567018299 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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