Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer langeuages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or diagree with this opinion?
My writing
Due to the mordernisation of the world day by day, a lot of unique and unpopular languages are losing their standing and become less important. Meanwhile, a myriad of people think this will do any harm and even can be benefited from. From my point of view, I completely diagree with their statement.
On the one hand, it is obvious that an international languages will bring advantages to us on account of the opening economy. People, from now on, are in need of English in order to connect with all valuable sources from all over the world and stand a greater chance to have the best opportunity. Moreover, tourism is gradually playing a crucial role in countries’ income. So that the native inhabittants ought to jump at this chance and bring their sightseeing closer to the foreigners. Finally, to be able to understand one language will shorten the distance among people, countries and cultures.
On the other hand, it is not worth exchanging one’s culture for all those advantages because when one country lost its own languge its culture will die out too. When people get acquaint with the second language, they will lost the real value and beauty of their country. That is the result of a long term of building and satisfaction of the last generation, the language brings the hopes, experience and the own culture of that country. Once people ease off it, they lost the soul of their homeland.
In conclusion, an international language is very necessary in this intergration time due to its benefits. However, it is undeniable that even the least popular language still have its own value and must to be preserve.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'language'?
Suggestion: language
...nd, it is obvious that an international languages will bring advantages to us on account ...
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Line 7, column 228, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...int with the second language, they will lost the real value and beauty of their coun...
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Line 9, column 199, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...r language still have its own value and must to be preserve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, moreover, second, so, still, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89679715302 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79751973908 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0986946673 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2857142857 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189494828735 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627843386553 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460992069268 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114988220275 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374569209207 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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