‘Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity.’ How far do you share this viewpoint?
In recent times, people are focusing more on education, and thus unemployment rates are decreased. Both these concepts are directly proportional to each other. It seems to me that sharing some amount of earned money for a social or communal cause, is a great thought and I will explain why in this essay.
To begin with, nowadays, people are educated enough, to support and understand the situation of needy people. However, there are NGOs, free homes, charitable trusts, etc are in place to help those people. It is obvious that these entities will need money to support such people. Everyone should at least spend ten percent of their income to support this cause. Perhaps, this will definitely help at least some families to provide proper education to their children or a shelter for their survival. Furthermore, the government is already in the process of subsidizing education and food in the rural areas to support people. Everybody should encourage this practice and can consider contributing a part of their income. People may unknowingly help a talented person to emerge by sharing some amount to the charitable trust. For example, a famous cricketer mentioned in one of the interviews that this NGO has helped him a lot in his studies and sports activities by providing him essential resources. He also mentioned that he is grateful to them, and now has started donating some amount to those kinds of charities.
I accept the fact that with such free funds people can become lazy and might not work hard to fulfill their needs. However, those can only be a handful of people. Thus, considering the genuine crowd, everyone can thereby share a part of their income with charitable trusts.
To conclude, it always feels good when you offer a hand to someone. Sooner or later, this will eventually show up on your doors to pay it back. Donating some part of the income will further help needy people to keep the smile intact on their faces.
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- You have recently purchased a gift item for one of your friends Write a letter to this friend In your letter tell him her about the gift tell how you want to sent the gift to this friend explain why you chose this gift for your friend 87
- Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity How far do you share this viewpoint 78
- Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity How far do you share this viewpoint 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, may, so, thus, as to, at least, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89457831325 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53906015338 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563253012048 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3873424589 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5263157895 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227872555583 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064924670864 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593549428694 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119940542486 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562928930134 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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