Everyday traffic seems to get worse on our roads. How can we reduce the number of cars on our roads today? What alternatives can we offer car drivers?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Over the years, there has been a dramatic increase in the number of vehicles on the road. This has reduced the quality of air in major cities. Vehicular pollution also leads to several health problems. Obviously, this is a major problem that needs to be solved.
If we really want to control air pollution, we need to reduce the number of cars on the road. This is not possible without proper legislation. In some countries, a family can own only one car. In my opinion, governments all over the world should enact similar laws. If we can prevent rich families from buying more and more cars, we will be able to reduce the number of vehicles on the road.
Controlling car ownership alone will not solve the problem. Cars have a shelf life. Older cars cause more pollution than newer cars. So, we also need legislation that forbids people from driving vehicles older than 10 years. Creating awareness among the public is equally important. People need to be made aware of the environmental impact of vehicles.
Legislation won’t fix the problem if there are no viable alternatives. Fortunately, plenty of them exist. Public transport is the alternative to private cars. The government should invest more money in public transport systems. If buses and trains arrive on time, very few people will want to drive to work. Carpooling and cycling are also good solutions. We also need to develop cities where people can walk to work.
To conclude, we must control vehicular congestion and pollution before the situation goes out of control. It is evident that we require new legislation and regulations to control this situation. We must also opt for better alternatives like public transport and cycling.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98257839721 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65131839838 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564459930314 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4079985719 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.2 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.48 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.4 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192383714423 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495514434526 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613394829184 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106171581667 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761048996362 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.42 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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