The food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer. Some people think it would be better to our environment and economy if people only ate only locally produced food. What extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Food is an essential part of survival of any living being. To fulfill this, need sometimes it is sent from far away places to reach consumer. but on the contrary, it creates pollution and detrimental to the local businesses. I am going to discuss both points as follows.
As a start, some areas do not have farms and cannot have their own crops, vegetables and fruits. They have to buy from different other agricultural places. For instance, cities do not have their own consumables along with certain hilly areas. Their soil is not suitable for such produce. They must buy from another places. Secondly, sometimes it is cheaper to buy from other country than your own. because that country may have cheaper resources to produce the same product. As a result, they sell on low price without compromising high quality. For example, 10 million cost of banana is imported on a monthly basis from India to Pakistan. Some restaurants sell exotic and unique dishes to high class celebrities and businessman. They need vegetables and fruits, which are not available in the local market. Therefore, they have to get them from other areas.
But on the contrary, there is downside of these as well. These travel through airplanes, trains and trolleys which consume fuel and discharge fusel gases, which is harmful for the environment and increase air pollution and result of the global warming and if we do not check on these issues, in near future they will get out of control. Secondly, when food is not bought from local people, it will damage the economy. Businesses will go bankrupt and poverty will increase.
In conclusion, i will say to strengthen our economy, we should support our own people and try to buy from local people mostly. On products which are not available and essential for a specific purpose should be gained from other means.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: But
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Suggestion: Because
...o buy from other country than your own. because that country may have cheaper resources...
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Message: “because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o buy from other country than your own. because that country may have cheaper resources...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87898089172 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53086749465 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570063694268 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0394982117 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6363636364 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2727272727 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86363636364 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15689338539 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401915166945 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404140056862 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982248585498 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036093220338 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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