A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
- thank him/her for the invitation
- explain why you cannot come
- ask him/her about other times to visit
Dear Mandeep,
Thanks a lot for inviting me to spend time with you in Canada. I was waiting for this time since it has been a long 4 years that we have met. Moreover, Canada is in my bucket list to visit as I am fasicinated by it's beauty.
As much as I was excited to visit, I am sad to tell you that I won't be able to make it because of a my prior commitment to visit my grandparents in Punjab. Because of my job, I was so busy that I did not get time to see them from last one year, and I was very regretful for this. My Grandparents are getting older and I do not want to miss an opportunity to meet them and spend time with them. These holidays are only time that I can spend some quality time with them cherrishing old memories.
However, I wanted to tell that I will have my winter vacations in the last week of year. I wish to visit to you then; you will also have free time during that week because of Christmas Celebrations. Also, I would love to be with you during the New Year evening to celebrate and have fun as we used to do during our college days. Let me know, if this plan suits you well.
Yours lovingly,
XYZ
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-07-14 | Kaur Mandeep | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'my'?
Suggestion: a; my
...at I wont be able to make it because of a my prior commitment to visit my grandparen...
^^^^
Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Because of my job, I was so busy that I did not get time to see them from last o...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.04405286344 5.12529762239 79% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29667988557 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568281938326 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8422469534 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13334995831 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591158126581 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551729170925 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890524034252 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262638334003 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.0946893788 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.15 12.4159519038 50% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 78.4519038076 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.