In future, many people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?
Over the past few decades, the international tourism industry has gone through a boom period. However, I agree with the statement that in the near future, due to recent Covid-19 global pandemic, there would be a lot of consequences in travel industry and people will choose to travel more in their home country than overseas.
To begin with, people plans for vacation to left their daily surroundings back and find peace. Therefore, many holiday-goers living in the big busy cities prefer to choose the peaceful places such as hill stations or beaches where the climate is different from their home. Likewise, many people from colder countries visits warmer and vice-versa. For instance, recently one travel magazine carried out a survey on the vacation-goers and the results shows that more than 70 percent of people love to travel overseas in need of the heavy climate change.
Moreover, another reason behind more international travel is the change in culture. Certainly, travel in the places having diverse historical background and well-known lifestyle will catch up the eyes of holiday goers more than the local places. Similarly, reason behind some international places are always crowded is because of its popularity and beautiful topology. For example, Bali from Indonesia is famous for its ravishing views.
However, nowadays the most of the overseas crowded tourist places are now lacking visitors by reason of Corona virus. People are petrified of being infected. Therefore, peeps are choosing to visit their homeland more than foreign places. They feel safe visiting in their country rather than unknown nation. Hence, I believe that, in near future visitors will choose to visit places in their home country rather than abroad.
All in all, it is fairly believing that tourism industry is hitting with many restrictions. Nevertheless, it will rise again once the vaccine is found for the Corona virus. However, vacationist will not be constrained to travel in their native places then overseas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, likewise, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27102803738 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64018645641 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579439252336 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.7975221259 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271813572849 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774569513173 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635702078414 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143640173487 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431455779832 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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