In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday.
DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?
In today's interconnected world, people have unprecedented access to information through smartphones with internet connections. This wealth of knowledge has become invaluable, opening up new possibilities for businesses and tourism. I firmly believe that in the future, more individuals will opt to vacation in their own countries rather than traveling abroad. Several factors support this viewpoint.
Firstly, the cost of international travel can be prohibitively high. When tourists venture abroad, they often face unexpected expenses, which can strain their budgets. Additionally, the weather and cultural differences in foreign destinations can be unsettling for travelers. Take, for instance, my uncle's experience during a trip to Thailand last summer. Although he won a free ticket through a game, his child fell ill after trying the famous Tom Yum dish, leading to a day spent nursing their sickness. Moreover, the unfamiliar smells in local markets affected his family's well-being. These anecdotes underscore the challenges of international travel.
Furthermore, travelers often underestimate the richness of their own country's traditional culture. Many assume that they already know enough about their homeland or consider their culture outdated and uninteresting. However, in reality, numerous individuals are dedicated to preserving and promoting their traditions daily. Both teenagers and adults recognize the cultural value within their heritage and strive to share it with the world, particularly with younger tourists. A prime example is the growing popularity of the Old Vietnam Museum on social media, where Vietnamese teenagers skillfully lead efforts to engage and contribute to the museum. This demonstrates the untapped potential for tourists to explore and appreciate their own cultural heritage.
In conclusion, those with health concerns should carefully consider international travel and perhaps seek assistance from tour guides. It is imperative that we support and foster our country's traditional culture to preserve and develop its unique brilliance. By exploring and valuing our own heritage, we can create a more meaningful and sustainable tourism industry for the future.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.915625 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07598910667 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69375 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4554844185 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.65 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171640158978 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491130268963 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630868145153 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103004004221 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389344418486 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.76 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.89 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.915625 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07598910667 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69375 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4554844185 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.65 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171640158978 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491130268963 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630868145153 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103004004221 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389344418486 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.76 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.89 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.