“ Global warming is one of the most serious issue that the world is facing today. What are the cause of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?”
It is true that our global is coming hotter everyday and global warming is a severe problem which require us to discuss immediately. There are several reasons for this problem and various solution could be taken by government and personal to improve the situation.
There are some reasons that resulting in global warming. One reason is that large amounts of emission from industrial parks and transportation. It has been estimated that over 70% emission of industrial parks is discharged directly to the atmosphere without treatment. This is a predominant factor to destroy the ozone layer. Furthermore, the demand of human in using the own car increasingly. This makes escalating rates of CO2. So, factories and vehicle is the first reason of climate change.
Another problem is deforestation. As we know, forest, which produce oxygen to maintain the existence of human, flora and fauna, is being cut down each day. Trees and plants play a part by absorbing emission like CO2. Nevertheless, burning forest for agricultural and non agricultural land become popular and we are losing a magic machine to help environment better.
There are several actions that government and individuals could take to solve the problems described above. Government need to introduce laws to limit emissions from factories and have heavy penalties for breaking the law situations. In protecting forest, government should organize more green days to raise the awareness of citizen. Also, investing in building a forest protecting system is a priority of government. Besides, individual are responsible for taking to reduce emission. Such as: Using public transport more instead of owner cars or if the distance is not far, we can walk or ride a bicycle that is good both health and atmosphere around us. Moreover, individual have to conserve forest by detection and denunciation cases of deforestation.
To conclude, it is clear that there are various reasons for global warming and solutions need to be taken to tackle this problem from governments and individual to minimize this worrying threat.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28915662651 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91276117705 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584337349398 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4544573912 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.619047619 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8095238095 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09523809524 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125532953381 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334061538472 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467456801485 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076400245251 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539558730884 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.