going swimming brings a number of benefits for people

Essay topics:

going swimming brings a number of benefits for people

Firstly, it is one of the best way to keep fit. Swimming help us to consume energy, so that we can stay in shape. Furthermore, it help to strengthen your muscles.
Senconly, you have more chances to make more friends. In a pool, you find someone have in common in order to chat with.
Last but not least, going swimming is know to be one of the best way to reduce stress. The reason why is that it requires swimmers to concentrate on . Therefore, you have no time to comtemplate your works, which mean your stress level could go down.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...t we can stay in shape. Furthermore, it help to strengthen your muscles. Senconly, ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...re friends. In a pool, you find someone have in common in order to chat with. Last...
^^^^
Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
... Last but not least, going swimming is know to be one of the best way to reduce str...
^^^^
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t it requires swimmers to concentrate on . Therefore, you have no time to comtempl...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, so, then, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 438.0 1615.20841683 27% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 100.0 315.596192385 32% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.16227766017 4.20363070211 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41332444747 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 70.0 176.041082164 40% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 130.5 506.74238477 26% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.9110725562 49.4020404114 34% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.75 106.682146367 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5 20.7667163134 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0825627792233 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302875348142 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448383165465 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.048581106538 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426876002021 0.056905535591 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 13.0946893788 41% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 50.2224549098 169% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 11.3001002004 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 12.4159519038 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 78.4519038076 20% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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