It is observed that art has provided us the unique connection with our past to understand and imagine the life perspectives of our ansectors. Government nowadays also promoting crafts of different joners like painting, music, theater, dance to name a few. However, certain set of people beleive it is a waste of money and this amount could be utilized for other welfare service of society. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with forthstate, art have unmatched significant virtue to help civilizations around the globe and this should sustain and evolve as well.
To embark with, government decide a set budget for each developing sector of country, according to the policies and agreements. Art is also a form of education, students can gain knowledge and set certain carrier path in any art form. These crafts are, symbol of our culture and heritage, also it mark our identity to the rest of the world, it is our utmost duity and resposibility to conserve it. In the recent piece of news by prominent "The Times", around fifty-seventy percent of foreigner tourist visit India to expierience and appraise the different art and crafts. Consequently art also paying back to our economy by tourism.
On the other hand, people from the other countries come to learn these arts, which provides an opportunity for sharing for the betterment of the humanity and art itself. In an empirical survey conducted by London's "Oxford University", it acsertained that only by the mean of antiques and old artifacts, we were able to unfold eighty percent of any regional histories around the globe, the various mistries get solved, also ancient techniques could be used for any further discovery or invention as well. Furthermore, these art are an impression of beuity and skills, which give pleasure and phycological satisfction to both performer and audience. Unquestionably, the art is inevitable and vital for human race.
To conclude, government should aid these vivid art forms persistantly for the various resions. Art signifies culture, heritage, history, skill, knowledge, and it is and emminent aspect of our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, well, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23906705539 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97830784839 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603498542274 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0427551692 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.8 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0821114198475 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304487678851 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426074790177 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0576424893755 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598560101345 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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