It is been observed that necessity os the mother of all inventions and science is the source to achieve all convenience, hence it is assumed that industrialization is the way to resolve several issues including poverty. While, on the other hand, many believe that it is a stigma on the environment and responsible for corrupt all pristine natural resources. In my opinion, growth in industrialization is inevitable, therefore we need to find out suitable ways to make environmental sustainability with this growth.
To embark with, from the sixteenth century, advancement in technology is in the boom. The main factors are a need for convenient ways, scientific liberation and a creative mindset of the people, which lead to a society with a vision of better future, consequently a large number of industries set up and provide many perks. The main attraction is it provides jobs to a number of population, therefore the issue of poverty is tackled in some way. In a recent piece of news by prominent "The Times", around seventy percent of the workforce around the world is associated with multiple industries, whether they are in developed or developing countries. Certainly, this impact is huge hence if we suppress the industrialization, then it will be a global issue.
On the other hand, Industrialization demands a large part of local resources like water, land, fuel, and many more, hence it lays stress on the limited environmental resources. Furthermore, the industrial waste is hazardous and can create fatal situations, because it is quite impossible to decompose it, on top of that it also contains some toxic chemicals which when coming in contact of the natural sources of water or land provide an adverse impact on the ecosystem. In an empirical survey from London's Oxford University", it ascertained that about eighty percent of freshwater rivers gets contaminated till they reach oceans, that the marine system is not more in balance.
To conclude, industrialization is vital, so as our nature. Suitable recycling of waste, reuse of resources and installments of better policies to deal with byproducts from industries is a must. Also, the implementation of stringent rules from the government would also help to avoide and suppress detrimental environmental issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...a vision of better future, consequently a large number of industries set up and provide many perk...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, therefore, while, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28882833787 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33339297637 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588555858311 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.6224514737 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.642857143 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2142857143 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158282421474 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495895375838 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471253503321 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908819858462 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376222286397 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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