Governments should not provide care or financial support for elderly people because it is the responsibility of each person to prepare for retirement and support him or herself. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people say that government should take the responsibility of providing all the necessary support to people when they retire, whereas others opine individuals to provide for themselves after retirement. In my opinion, I support the idea of government providing for their elderly citizens after they leave the workforce.
On one hand, there are some valid arguments supporting the view of people to provide for themselves after retirement. This is because if government takes the responsibility of taking care of elderly people, then it will put unnecessary burden on younger generation, in the form of higher taxes who might already be coping with inflation levels within their economies. For example, such a scenario is already prevalent in Japan. Moreover, one has enough time before retirement to make all the necessary arrangements to provide for themselves at an elderly age. Therefore, individuals should plan and manage their finances in a way so they can look after themselves in future.
On the other hand, many people argue governments to take the responsibility of supporting their elderly citizens after retirement. This is because, these people have already shared their income with government in the form of taxes. Therefore, after retirement they have all the right to get the necessary support from the governmental authorities. This can be, for example, in the form of monthly pensions, free or subsidized healthcare, concessions on public transport etc.
To recapitulate, there are various arguments to support both the viewpoints as stated above. However, I believe governments to take the ownership of looking after retirees, as these people have already paid taxes to the government during their lifetime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 665, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...a way so they can look after themselves in future. On the other hand, many people argu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, whereas, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45185185185 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98192083259 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52962962963 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2610777221 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.230769231 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312919958553 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12321885865 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757045605976 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211926012569 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738522722248 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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