In modern era, it is a controversial topic in these days because some individuals reckon that authorities spend oodles money on public celebrations such as national holidays and local festivals but others claim that the government spending money on these festivals is a wastage. In my opinion, government should alot funds to celebrate festival as well as on other things like infrastructure of the society. I partially agree with the given notion and I will discuss my point of views in my upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, there are some reasons of this phenomenon. First and foremost, authorities increasing spending on celebrations can promote local culture as well as it has profound impact on new generation by organising the event. They can learn about their culture, tradition and background. Not only the local people can have better understanding of the festivals but also the travellers can have great opportunity to experience their culture. It helps boost the economy of the nation. For instance, in India, government celebrates Independence Day on 15th August on a large scale to remember the struggle of freedom fighters to free India from the rule of the Britishers.
On the other hand side, some individuals recommend that government spending their funds on national events instead of developing of the infrastructure. Moreover, despite the fact, authorities should provide employment opportunities to many people along with improve health conditions.which will help them to polish the growth of the society and it also assists to decrease the amount of poverty rate in their nation. Furthermore, government need to spend their money on public transports or better networking in underdeveloped country.
To conclude, although, it is clear that festivals are important to celebrate because it reveals cultural and traditional values. Yet, the other activities are also mandatory of the society, However, I believe that they must spend fiancee to supply free education and healthcare services, in order to have a convenient life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40372670807 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07979348148 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1400493581 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.285714286 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31955700029 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977935474636 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869578946528 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180117478915 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897843290626 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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