a groupe of people like to spend money rather save it. why they do this? what are the avantages and disadvantages?
nowadays people do not like to deposit their income and spend it. this approach includes some benefits and some drawbacks. it seems that the best way of financial management of people is the median situation. from one point of view , people say that be happy just in time, so on this way use all your facilities and make your self happy. this approach can be attractive at first but when you thinking about your life as a long-term process you can get a little concern that what will happen in your old age or the times that you will not be in health. as a case, my uncle has 70 years and every time that he discusses about his memories we hear that he had a wealthy man during the youth but regarding to unsuitable management that he had on his capital, in old ages he is an ordinary man with low-level salary. this issue put the think in mind that not only health but also the society conditions can affect on your life economy. however, an other group of people who most of them are women, prefer to save lion share of their money for unpredictable future. regarding to an investigation that have been conducted by a none governmental research institute about the future forecasting and way of facing with them, most of the questioners had seen that this problems can fix by their deposited money. an other psychological assess that have been done of this group had been shown that the majority of them have percentage of depration. all in all, in order to answer to this question that why some of the people spend their money and not save it, it can say that this issue is relating to their point of view about the life and their idea that have about the horizon of their life, So the money spending has more benefits rather that drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37781858325 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528125 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.2306592126 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.454545455 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0909090909 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228603723801 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898376839496 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844573057324 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228603723801 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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