The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the healthcare system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the health care department of all the countries, especially developed nations are worrying about the burgeoning issue that is obesity. Some people believe that the best way to fight against this issue is by providing physical training from school level itself. This essay will discuss how physical education in school curriculum help the people and society to lead a healthy life.
To begin with, in this modern world almost everyone gets the chance for schooling. So in order to pass a message to our society, students are the best medium. Moreover, today’s students are tomorrow’s citizens. Educating them on the importance of physical activity will help to build a healthier society. An epitome here is, almost all the government schools in Kerala, a state in India, introduced a period in their curriculum for physical exercises. This is under the supervision of a well-qualified instructor. In short, schooling is the best time to provide physical training as it reflects in the entire life of the aspirants.
Additionally, students can easily influence their parents. Once they are convinced by the advantages of physical training in one’s life from school, they can make understand their parents too. To illustrate this, it has been observed that parents also take part in games and sports activity with children. To sum up, Physical education in the school curriculum will also help parents to be healthy.
To recapitulate, this essay discussed the reasons how physical education in school can help in reducing obesity. The main reasons discussed are the influence of students in today’s and future society and how they are helping elders to take part in physical activities. In my opinion, I completely agree that more lessons in the curriculum that are related to the importance of physical exercise will help our healthcare system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, in short, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30100334448 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89659139678 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528428093645 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0008912536 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2352941176 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199384261018 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633548159591 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05029011268 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126777549503 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524067242297 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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