A growing number of people feel that animal should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
It has become a debate topic about “Many people believe that animals should not be exploited by humans and should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must use animals to meet their various needs, such as food and research”. The following essay will go into detail about both points of view on the subject, but in my opinion, people should treat animals properly if they are to be employed as a food source or as research subjects in laboratories.
On the one hand, with people who believe that animal also a living creatures so human doesn’t have the rights to exploit animals. Animals also have the same feeling as human beings there is not be fair for mankind to exploit them. Journalist and farmers also receive some cases that cows had cried before they were killed for meat in the slaughterhouse which means that they also had same feeling as human beings. In another cases some animal in circus was treated badly and being forced to work too hard by animal trainer though they had been received so many injured.
On the other hand, it cannot be denied that humanity needs the help of animals in various kinds of ways. First and foremost, we need animals to produce and supply food. In many agricultural nations farmers need to use animals such as cows or buffaloes to help with farm chores and some they need dairy cow to providing milk. Without the existence of these animals, human should face with issue about the lack of food supplies and it will lead humanity to starvation. Secondly, we need animals to use in sccientific experiments or medical testing for new kinds of medications and therapies. They usually test new medications and therapies on mice or monkeys because they are close relative of humans before they are being tested on human. These experiments may appear cruel, but hundreds of lives have been saved thanks to them.
In conclusion, people have different views about the explotation of animals. Some people agree with that topic some disagree with it. In my opinion, I think using animals to help human beings is not a problem, as long as we treat them properly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 68, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'creature'?
Suggestion: creature
...e who believe that animal also a living creatures so human doesn’t have the rights to exp...
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Line 2, column 194, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...me feeling as human beings there is not be fair for mankind to exploit them. Journ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75945945946 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37189072162 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516216216216 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8922474825 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0625 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.51561649558 0.244688304435 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16965650783 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126406483337 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319903365809 0.151304729494 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129584874241 0.056905535591 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.