The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.Do you agree or disagree?
It's often argued that, with the advent rising of the online purchases will lead's to the shutdown of the stores in the coming years. I completely disagree with this argument, many prefer to shop locally instead of buying online because they cannot feel or see the product in live.
It's true that shopping online provide's us the various option's to buy conveniently without going anywhere from the place you are, but, in-terms of safety, it's not best way. We can be easily tricked in many forms. For example, one of my friend wanted to buy a laptop online and browsed various websites to get it for a discounted price than the local market offers. Landed into a site which has a nice user interface and the main banner of the site says forty percent all over the products they sell. Felt something is fishy and purchased offline in the companies outlet. My friend was happy to buy offline as he got some discount as well as a gift to choose two accessories the brand offers.
But buying from dealers or local shops is not always possible because they may lack in selling the new arrivals or products which are rarely bought. For example, last year I thought of purchasing shoes from a famous brand. But, that model is barely available in the market because of its low in production by the manufacturer. I have contacted many dealers and stores throughout the city i am residing and no where the footwear is available. Then, I have started to search online and luckily found them in company's official site. I have spoken with the customer care to confirm the authenticity and purchased them with a lesser price tag compared to my budget.
To conclude, Many believe always believe that purchasing product from the local shops is always comfortable to try than buying online. Even though, the percentage of people buying online may increase due to the ease and availability, It will not lead to the closing of all the stores either in cities or towns.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...ent rising of the online purchases will leads to the shutdown of the stores in the co...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...place you are, but, in-terms of safety, its not best way. We can be easily tricked ...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the best'.
Suggestion: not the best
...e you are, but, in-terms of safety, its not best way. We can be easily tricked in many f...
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Line 5, column 553, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...g is fishy and purchased offline in the companies outlet. My friend was happy to buy offl...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hoose two accessories the brand offers. But buying from dealers or local shops i...
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Line 9, column 389, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... dealers and stores throughout the city i am residing and no where the footwear i...
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Line 9, column 407, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...s throughout the city i am residing and no where the footwear is available. Then, ...
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Line 9, column 662, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lesser price tag compared to my budget. To conclude, Many believe always believe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72594752187 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43543037946 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5666664293 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.3125 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166250372473 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476403234839 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495262204576 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11493847528 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458863653673 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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