In the past few years, online shopping has gained a huge attraction in all over the world and the sales graphs are growing rapidly. Online shopping has enabled the shoppers a wide variety of collection to choose from. Some people believe that this exponential demand towards online shopping will push the small scale business and shops towards permanent shut down. I personally agree with this point and going to discuss the potential of the above point.
In past decades, a person has to go the market every time to get something they need. But after the gaining popularity of online shopping they started ordering everything sitting back at home, which has directly affected the local business sales. Somehow, this has made a person lazy also to go out and get stuff for him/her, and leaving a negative health impact sometimes.
Moreover, for having an access to national and global market online, merchants buy a bulk of products in one go, so individual product cost is also low while buying from the manufacturer. Hence, the prices listed in online sites are less in comparision to local shops and people tend to go for that unbeatable price tag instead of a long wait in mega sales time.
In conclusion, the online shopping is growing heavily overtime and people are getting addicted by the price and facilities offered by the online sellers. In the past few decades, it has challenged many big organizations. If it grows in the same pace in future, then the local shops will not have any other ways rather than closing the shops.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
...pact sometimes. Moreover, for having an access to national and global market online, m...
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Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... has challanged many big organizations. If it grows in the same pace in future the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, while, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86486486486 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43028648368 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9709566487 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21363621908 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772723755338 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609589432421 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127145130833 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730668249656 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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