Over the last decades computers and Internet connections have become affordable to a constantly growing number of users, which has been having a profound impact on the economic tissue of developed countries. Considered as one of the most decisive breakthroug of the last century, the Internet has permanently changed the way we face our day-to-day life. Computers play a major role in several fields, from high-tech surgeries to mechanical engineering so that it can be said that a modern, technologically developed world would be unthinkable without computers and the Internet.
Activities likes shopping or booking holidays carried out thanks to the Internet have increased markedly in scale and scope over the past few years, generating a fertil soil for multinational companies like Amazon or Ali Baba, where consumers from all over the world can purchase almost every item they desire with a couple of clicks. Without leaving home, it is nowadays possible to book a holiday, to plan a trip and to order food in a matter of minutes.
Allo of these amazing aspects, however should not blind us to the fact that the explosion of Internet-based services has its own downside as well.
May stores have been shut down, due to the fact they were not more able to keep up with the competition of big companies like Amazon, which, having the capacity to rely on millions of consumers, have an unbridgeable edge over traditional shops. Althoug the progressive disappearance of retailed business represent sometimes a huge loss for the vitality of a neighbourood or a street, I do not believe that Internet shops will be in a foreseeable future wiping the out. People still need phisical places where they can see items, try them on or just talk to clerks.
Furthermore, surveys show that a large number of stores have adapted to the new online trend, so that customers can choose whether to purchase goods in the traditional way or to turn to the Internet.
In conclusion, although online shopping represents a valide alternative to traditional routes of buying, since it allows to purchase good from all over the world quickly and safely, traditional shops are not destined to disappear.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 305, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'represent'.
Suggestion: sometimes represent
...sive disappearance of retailed business represent sometimes a huge loss for the vitality of a neigh...
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Line 7, column 32, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...clerks. Furthermore, surveys show that a large number of stores have adapted to the new online t...
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Line 9, column 122, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'purchasing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: purchasing
...ional routes of buying, since it allows to purchase good from all over the world quickly an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0635359116 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88780281275 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60773480663 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0034864753 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.636363636 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.9090909091 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109755806607 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401789400233 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534794062605 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0550261856514 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490920699378 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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