A well-being of a person is often measured by his/her happiness. Happiness is also a measure of success for some whereas for some it is a measure of mental peace. Whichever might be your personal definition of happiness, will always be true for your life.
Happiness is a very subjective as well as open-ended term which is still undefined. It is very difficult to define happiness for people, as we all are rational beings and thought process of every individual is different. Happiness is abstract as well as non-measurable and hence cannot be quantified to reach to a conclusive definition. Different people can have varied opinions on their definition of happiness. For example, a person working in a city will have a seven digit salary as a measure of happiness whereas a student studying in the same city will have good marks as a measure of his/her happiness. Happiness, therefore cannot be defined under common grounds.
Hard work is one of the most important factors for achieving happiness. In today's world happiness is more or less related to a person's achievements in his/her personal and professional life. Along with hard work, balance is also an important factor to achieve happiness in a holistic way. The word 'balance' is not only limited to personal and professional life but also with mind-body and inner-outer world balance.
To conclude i would say happiness in any form should not be kept confined to oneself and should be translated to others by actions.
- Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness. 56
- Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary school to universities, too much time spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Agree or disagree? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, as for, for example, as well as, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99193548387 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92045737512 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9722922396 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4285714286 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251126551263 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934941907892 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746420265027 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130902786166 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877419184895 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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