A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress.
What should people do to stay healthy in your country?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Undoubtedly the individual who follow healthy diet regimes , do regular exercise and combat with anxiety are considered to be healthy persons. Even though all over the globe there are ample measures to keep body fit and fine, in my country people devote major chunk of their precious time towards physical exercise and stick with effective diet plans.
Owing to sedentary lifestyle a major portion of populace has become prone to several chronic ailments, still some commoners are efficient in managing their health by indulging themselves in exercise routines. Seemingly, Indian citizens practice the yoga, do cycling and becoming the gym freaks as well as sports freaks. Consequently, these physical
exercise intensify the stamina and ameliorate the immunity which is imperative to keep the physique in good state. Also it is biased to overlook that fact published by WHO that the rate of server ailments are trimming down annually in India due to the consistent practice of ancient Yoga.
On the top of that, balanced diets always play remarkable roles in maintaining good health. Gladly, my countrymen know the effective repercussions of a health meals, hence they have reduced the intakes of sugar riched items and products which are high in carbohydrates. Despite, Indian is a land of exotic vegetables, herbs and spices which have remedial effects on body as well as mind, thus common folks are becoming aware of using blends of them in their diet. As a result of, commoners are able maintain their health in good state. To exemplify, as per the survey conducted by American Health Association in the gone calendar year, the proliferated usage of Basil in Indian cuisines has brought the obesity of Indian masses under absolute control.
To conclude,although there are ends number of measures to retain the body in good state, Indians has already recognized the exercise and nutritious meal are impeccable strategies to lead the healthy and prosperous life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2429022082 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73276772911 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618296529968 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.9610814832 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.5 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111090995363 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411697378667 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438194467194 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636003454828 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447347235857 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.