On the path of modernization and rapid industrialization, we are witnessing the major ecological imbalance. All species of flora and fauna play a vital role in completing ecological cycle. By considering few preemptive measures we can keep our system intact. However few have a conservative approach considering to the change. In this essay after discussing both the views and state how we can keep our eco-system in order and there prerequisites.
Even though majority of humans, have interference in the natural resource, there are few who consider and believe in afforestation, Greenery and animal foundations. They play a major role in upbringing and saving flora and fauna based on research and techniques. For instance PETA has freed several elephants from circus and have provided freedom to several wild animals and MST Bio technologies health care has invented several medicines to save plants and those species which were turning extinct.
However rapid growth in urbanization, machines and technology animals are left with no free space for their existence. Many species are turning extinct even after taking several measures.Due to climate change Atlantic icebergs are melting and seal level water is increasing. This has led to extinction of white polar bear. If humans were never involved in activity such as urbanization, deforestation and industrialization, there would have been more chance of well and acceptable ecological balance. There would have been no term of word "extinct" in dictionary.
The Conclusion to be drawn is that we must believe and act in sustainable development and make more use of renewable source of energy without hindering the existence of animals, plants and environment. This will ultimately help in meeting the needs of present generation without compromising the needs of future generation.
- The world of work is changing rapidly. Working conditions today are not the same as before and people no longer rely on taking one job for life. Discuss the possible causes for these changes and give your suggestions for how people should prepare for work 73
- People are sleeping less than in the past. Why do people do it? What are the effects of this? 78
- The range and quality of food that we can buy has changed because of technological and scientific advances. Some people regard this change as an improvement, while others believe that it is harmful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
- Some people buy local products while others prefer international products Do you agree or disagree 65
- Today, the younger and older generation are in the same work place. Is this more an advantage or more disadvantage. 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53846153846 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24140018249 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618881118881 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.678732795 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.93333333333 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11486885128 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340392835917 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037723202934 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630654579765 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248691216984 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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