It is an obvious truth that majority of people consider going to aboard and continuing their education as the best achievement. However, it seems like a good idea, it is not free from any kind of issue and it has some drawbacks as well.
So, people who are apposed strongly believe, it is better to stay in your country. As a matter of fact, I completely disagree with this sentence.
The first and foremost reason for being disagree is that, people who choose to immigrate in foreign countries can benefit a huge number of facilities which are hard to be accessed in their country. For instance, in some majors especially medical, foreign universities are equipped with different facilities like the best laboratories and libraries.
secondly, you can be more familiar with variety of cultures that give you a chance to broaden your horizon and be more experienced. So, you can tackle problems easily in comparison to others and is going to have the best impact not only on your educational life but also your social life.
In conclusion, there are a lot of merits and demerits related to educational immigration and based on the above mentioned points, the benefits outweigh the drawbacks. Therefore, I am strongly in favour of going overseas in spite of having some problems.
- It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media.What do you think is the reason for the growth in the rate of juvenile crime?What solution can you offer to deal with this situation? 61
- The prevention of health problems and health illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree. 73
- Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.To what extent do you agree with this statement? 61
- you are renting an apartment and the neighbors are disturbing you. write a letter to your landlord explaining what the problem is, what do you do to solve the problem and what action you want the owner to take. 64
- You have a problem with a neighbour.Write a letter to your neighbor. i your letter. Describe the problem. say how long it has been a problem.. Explain what action you want the neighbors to take 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...he best laboratories and libraries. secondly, you can be more familiar with variety ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a matter of fact, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95852534562 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76385537928 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603686635945 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1204436665 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10896391292 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434212773506 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396421624341 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0570584288805 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288175084737 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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