The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The
new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and
further education will be something that continues throughout life
Professional outlook of today’s generation has been revolutionized entirely, hence instead of earning livelihood by pursuing single career, more and more people are preferring to opt for multiple careers at same time. Reason for this paradigm shift is availability of variety of options and to quench the thirst to pursue passion alongside having a stable professional life. Due to this change in psychology age is no longer a barrier to opt for higher education and is a never ending process. This essay shall discuss the shift in people’s attitude towards higher education and professions.
Unlike past, a variety of professional opportunities and choices are available for people to choose from and this has become possible due to technological advancement. For instance, internet offers a variety of courses and job opportunities, and by telecommuting a medical resident pursuing post-graduation can earn a handsome amount of money without having to give up education. This implies to every profession because of widespread utility of internet, anyone having apt skills can opt for multiple careers depending on needs and choice
Furthermore, rather than participating in a rat race of money, people are now aiming to pursue their passions alongside having a stable job. Having a main well-paying job gives them freedom to explore and express inner self. A study conducted by Paris community of Arts, 56% of artists of city of Paris are professionally qualified to do technical jobs, and are pursuing arts to fulfill their intellectual needs.
Because of aforementioned reasons, higher education has become a continuous process spread over the life span of an individual. Education is no longer confined to a younger population, rather people of any age group suiting their personal and professional needs chose to continue higher education and sharpen their skills
To sum up with, it is preferred nowadays to opt for multiple careers to satisfy monetary and intellectual needs, this has become possible due to availability of many opportunities and change in behavioral and thinking patterns. Higher education is no more limited to a certain age group, rather is an everlasting process
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, look, so, well, for instance, of course, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4231884058 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16067785104 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539130434783 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.3576236537 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.916666667 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15641452477 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612128632257 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381628417609 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898258821651 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191500634034 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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