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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: devabe2005
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 522, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ate companies, as there is often a long period of time between commencement of research and th...
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Line 3, column 800, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a quick fashion" with adverb for "quick"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...-held companies are more likely to work in a quick fashion, whereas public organisations usually t...
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Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ic entity can sustain losses for a long period of time if a project is beneficial to its citiz...
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Line 5, column 724, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nducted research, such as electric cars, tend to be rather expensive, due to whic...
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Line 5, column 940, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ase investment in the sciences, it would cause unfathomable losses for the people...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lthough private interests in science may yield much progress and benefit for huma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, may, so, thus, whereas, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2379.0 1615.20841683 147% => OK
No of words: 444.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35810810811 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1212892911 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 753.3 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 2.10420841683 570% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.7282022671 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.928571429 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7142857143 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159007230727 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614485967782 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355763065734 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112464019751 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492817446268 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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