As can be seen in recent years, migration has become a massive problem which shows a significant impact on people’s life. This essay will discuss the major causes and some consequences which related the most to this issue.
To begin with, immigration is being happened due to the need in improving people living status as well as self-growth. There are a countless number of problems in developing countries such as poverty, the deficiency of jobs, old-fashioned culture, …etc. These unsolved problems require people to find new and supportive land or basically is a place where they can earn money to deal with social expenses. In addition, some people move to another country to find an advanced education and a steady economy in which they can develop their abilities. For example, American has witnessed an enormous number of immigration due to its advancements in both industry and agriculture.
The dramatic population growth and substandard living conditions are the two major consequences of this issue. Not every country can control the number of legal migration. Unfortunately, the number of illegals has been shown to take a higher number than the other feature. This leads to population explosion in those religion and other related results such as homeless, the lack of occupations, massive uneducated proportion, …etc. Not receive social services is an attribute to unallowed moving people. They will not have health care, education, … and many more. For instance, people who don’t have the required paperwork will struggle in finding an education.
In conclusion, the need of finding a country to support living and develop itself causes one of the most massive problems of our planet-immigration. This is occurring leads to a significant increase in population as well as low quality of life.
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- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development 61
- It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct e g Dinosaur dodos There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening Do you agree or disagree 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this religion' or 'those religions'?
Suggestion: this religion; those religions
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lation as well as low quality of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26712328767 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97372303869 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2427677305 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122716886061 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381145921503 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329989039271 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703851337347 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282985495923 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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