Immigration has a major impact on the society.
What are the main reasons of immigration?
To what consequences can it lead?
Migration to other countries is a common trend these days. Each day more and more people migrate to other countries, which has a significant impact on the society. This essay will first discuss why people are migrating and then elaborate the results associated with this problem, followed by a logical conclusion.
Primarily, people from developing and underdeveloped countries migrate to developed nations for better education facilities for the children and high standard of living for the whole family. This can be exemplifies by a large number of Indians, who are migrating to Canada, for the sake of their better working arrangements and good quality of life. Another reason for such a trend is the lack of life security as a result of unstable political environment and wars, which compels people to move to safe countries where their life is protected.
However, such a trend causes problems to both the immigrants and their destination country. Many a times, people fail to get jobs in immigrant country because of lack of language skills and adaptability reasons. Therefore, government has to take a responsibility of providing training facilities to help the new people adjust in new country, which causes a burden on the financial resources of that particular nation. Moreover, immigration can also lead to overcrowding, which can restrict the government from providing basic amenities to their citizens. For instance, a huge burden on Indian government to take care of the people from other countries is depriving of its citizens of their fundamental facilities.
To conclude, while people move to other countries in search of educational and professional facilities, such a trend sometimes causes more problems than solutions. Hence, it is crucial to consider all the possible outcomes before leaving their home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, as to, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33564013841 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96320672618 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567474048443 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7414404137 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.615384615 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0794136576117 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332973834441 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512606225844 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0404606333908 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455436733537 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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