Immigration has a major impact on the society.
What are the main reasons for immigration? To what consequences can it lead?
Do you know that your country is getting empty of its own population but getting people from other countries? that is one of the issues from globalization but what limits could the immigration reach? I convinced that immigration could aid countries and people to develop locals by introducing new cultures. The aim of this essay is to prove why people decide to emigrate from their own countries and the positive results of migration.
First of all, the migration is caused by problems in countries, where the population get stuck in a low-quality life due to the lack of job opportunities and expensive cost of living. For instance, in South America, Colombia has one of the highest numbers in immigration because its unemployment rate overtakes 19% and the living cost extremely high. Anyhow there are people who emigrate to other countries just for personal reasons different from the financial problems.
However, immigration brings good results for countries and people due to people improve quality-living because they arrive in a country with better opportunities for them and the country get benefit from new people with high work energy. For example, Malta is receiving monthly hundreds of South America immigrants, this is a place that definitely is full of work opportunities, and they always are willing to work. However, migration is not always effective and helpful but in the major of cases, it gives benefits to both sides.
To sum up, immigration is mainly stimulated by a lack of opportunities in countries, but the result is a win to win between the immigrants and countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, for example, for instance, you know, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14503816794 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93470500126 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545801526718 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9172739004 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.545454545 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167144039669 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678095741223 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062118553889 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107491374773 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029689140895 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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