With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are
writing letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will
disappear completely.
To what extent do you agree or disagree? How important do you think is letter-writing?
The popularity of high-tech gadgets such as computers or mobile phones has dramatically changed the way people communicating. That is why some argue that handwritten letters will no longer be used and entirely vanish. While I accept that letter-writing would be detrimentally affected by new kinds of communication, I would argue that traditional writing skills cannot be died out no matter how advanced technology is.
To begin with, it cannot be denied that letter-writing has lost its grip in modern life. First, sending text via smartphones or laptops is much easier and more convenient than writing letters. Short messages are typed, sent, and immediately received within a minute. By contrast, the traditional process of sending letters required more steps and time as well as the shipping fee. Additionally, more and more apps offer users convenient functions that help correct vocabulary and grammatical mistakes automatically when composing text documents; therefore, could improve their writing skills.
However, it is a crude and simple thought when assuming that traditional letter-writing skills will definitely disappear. First and foremost, writing is a vital skill. To be more specific, the style of text messages or emails is different from that of paper letters; therefore, it cannot be used in formal papers. Therefore, people still need to learn traditional writing skills when composing important documents such as confirmation or motivation letters. Moreover, a handwritten letter is considered as a remembrance item that transfers the emotion and sincerity between the sender and the receiver.
In conclusion, I am firmly convinced that handwritten letters still play a special role in modern life and cannot be replaced by any other kind of communication.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-01-11 | vyhanh | 78 | view |
| 2019-04-11 | Amir Nazaripoor | 53 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53846153846 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13682319071 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4513607147 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247155065508 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881515090984 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588112124734 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142406063943 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761933563641 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.