Supermarkets are considered as a go-to place for shopping nowadays. Supermarkets have made miscellaneous shopping under one roof possible. On the other side, local shops have noticed a significant drop in their sales due to them. However, this development in the shopping business has more positive impacts than negative ones.
People want to have different options before buying something and supermarkets give people a lot of different shopping options under one roof. People are able to get a lot of different options in terms of product selection. When it comes to buying imported products a vast range of Imported products is easily available at supermarkets. Whereas, local shops don’t sell a lot of imported products. Another big positive supermarket have is that every now and then they are offering discounts on all kinds of products. This means many people are able to buy their desired products at discounted rates. Whereas, local shops do not offer those discounts.
Local shops have been vastly impacted by this shopping trend. When more and more people visit supermarkets over local shops for shopping then the sales of local shops start to dip. Due to the drop in their sales, a lot of local shops are forced to go out of business. When people shop from supermarkets then they are not contributing in terms of building local communities. Which ultimately affects the employees and employers of local shops. Employers are forced to downsize when their business is not prospering.
In a conclusion, supermarkets have been the popular choice of people in recent years. Due to this trend, local shops have suffered when their sales start to decrease.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15808823529 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74793243682 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492647058824 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0954900803 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.8421052632 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3157894737 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84210526316 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370494126273 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131229865781 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841447609671 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249390436984 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789664609695 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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