It is an unarguable fact that white-colored employees have been migrating to developed nations from their own developing countries or from poor countries. This could be because rich countries can offer a good paycheck as well as a better work environment for skilled migrants. As a result of this poor countries are getting affecting furthermore. However, by taking some measures nations can put this trend under check.
First of all, migration of professionals can lead to potential job vacancies in niche technology industries, which is hard to fill by any other working citizens. For instance, the IT industry is suffering due to a lack of manpower in many countries. Apart from this, if there are no surgeons then providing high-end health care would be extremely difficult for any nation. On top of this, coming up with either new highways or building affordable homes will hit the grounds if there are no engineers or architects. As a result of these, there won’t be any development in poor countries and eventually, it will impact their economy.
In order to overcome the mentioned problems, bureaucrats should start providing high paychecks, especially to skilled professions. Governments should start thinking about providing a few other benefits such as tax exemptions, affordable health insurance plans to stop immigration. On the other hand, officials can also provide few subsidies to the industries and encourage them to set up offshore development centers so that they can provide more secure jobs to the citizens.
Loosing of talented workers will defiantly affect any country especially in terms of economy. Developing nations or poor countries should provide more flexibility and good salaries in order to keep them in the motherland. Otherwise, the migration trend will increase in the future as well.
- Some people choose to eat no fish or meat. They believe that this is not better for your own health but also benefits the world as whole. Discuss these view and give your own opinion. 73
- In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest? 56
- Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? 67
- In recent years , many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping.Is this a positive or negative development ? 61
- Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.•You should write at least 250 words.•Y 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 278, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... work environment for skilled migrants. As a result of this poor countries are get...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...y other working citizens. For instance, the IT industry is suffering due to a lack of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33448275862 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96836471153 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8494382414 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.133333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0344102287075 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0144554215332 0.084324248473 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0243126928772 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0244662107583 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204317552162 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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