It is undeniably true that being in the happiest state would be essential for the mankind irrespective of age group. While few experts believe that the younger generation is the happiest on the planet, few would argue that adulthood would bring more joy into life. In my view, I strongly agree with the latter opinion and in favor of the adult’s happiness.
To embark upon, teenage years and college environment undoubtedly would add extra pleasure. First and foremost advantage teenage living is having more number of friends and being sociable. Because of this, they can have more satisfying things as a team and they can either go for bike rides or movies together. In addition to it, by not taking anything seriously, it would be an added benefit to take part in any advantageous activities for instance bungee jumping, sky diving to name but a few. Therefore, it will create a few golden memories to cherish for the whole life. However, kids neither have financial support nor an individual, they always have to depend on someone else, which would sometimes be a hurdle to cross.
Shifting towards the second school of thought, although family responsibilities would add up in the adolescent stage, this stage would be more fun compared to youths. Firstly, adults can start earning and this would eventually create a new life for them, which can be independent. As a result of having deep pockets, they can not only travel to the places where they wish to be but also can purchase luxury products such as cars, gadgets, etc. Thus, it would add a whole new dimension to their lifestyle and bring joyfulness to life. Secondly, adults would receive more respect in society compared to younger ones.
To conclude, in my opinion, even though adults hit by the family responsibilities, this period of lifespan would be more delightful because of all the reasons stated above.
- Some people are of the opinion that being highly qualified is the only way to ensure a well-paying job. While others believe that having work experience is the best way to get a well-paying job.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? 67
- Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change. Others believe that actions of individuals are wasteful and irrelevant and it is only government and large businesses that can make a difference. Discuss bot 78
- Money is important in most people s lives Although some people think it is more important than others What do you feel are the right uses of money What other factors are important for a good life 84
- The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours.Write a letter to the local council. In your letter-Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working p 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...activities for instance bungee jumping, sky diving to name but a few. Therefore, it will c...
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Line 3, column 728, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h would sometimes be a hurdle to cross. Shifting towards the second school of th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95583596215 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65320876733 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602523659306 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2844945487 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.733333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103429330496 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437270802456 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306595559975 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730769704002 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212450124605 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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